Hey
Min kæreste skal bruge noget hjælp og tænkte måske nogen kloge hoveder herinde kunne hjælpe lidt?
Alt i skal gøre er at læse det igennem og tjekke for eventuelle fejl, der skulle helst ikke være nogen.

Do not stand at my grave and weep,
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft star-shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry,
I am not there; I did not die.

Do not stand at my grave and weep,
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft star-shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry,
I am not there; I did not die.
Noget i vejen med den sætning.

Rookieboy skrev:Do not stand at my grave and weep,
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft star-shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry,
I am not there; I did not die.
Noget i vejen med den sætning.

Det hænger vel sammen med nedstående`?

Do not stand at my grave and weep

Do not stand at my grave and weep;
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die.

Written at least 50 years ago, this poem has been attributed at different times to J.T. Wiggins (an English emigre to America), two Americans: Mary E. Fry and Marianne Reinhardt, and more recently to Stephen Cummins, a British soldier killed in Northern Ireland who left a copy for his relatives. Others claim it is a Navajo burial prayer.

The following was taken from The London Magazine December / January 2005:
"Mary Elizabeth Frye nee Clark was born in Dayton, Ohio, on November 13th 1905. She dies on September 15th 2004. Mary Frye, who was living in Baltimore at the time, wrote the poem in 1932. She had never written any poetry, but the plight of a German Jewish girl, Margaret Schwarzkopf,who was staying with her and her husband, inspired the poem. She wrote it down on a brown paper shopping bag.
Margaret Schwarzkopf had been worrying about her mother, who was ill in Germany. The rise of Anti-Semitism had made it unwise for her to join her mother. When her mother died, she told Mary Frye she had not had the chance to stand by her mother's grave and weep.
Mary Frye circulated the poem privately. Because she never published or copyrighted it, there is no definitive version. She wrote other poems, but this, her first, endured. Her obituary in The Times made it clear that she was the undisputed author this famous poem, which has been recited at funerals and on other appropriate occasions around the world for seventy years. A 1996 Bookworm poll named it the Nation's Favourite Poem"[London Magazine Editor, Sebastian Barker]



Det kommer vel helt an på hvad hun skal med digtet. Skal det gengives, så skal det gengives i den originale form. Er det en engelsk-opgave, hvor hun skal tolke det og finde mulige omskrivninger, så skal man have fat i en der er bedre til engelsk end mig ;)

Det er til en tatoo ... så ret vigtigt.

When you awaken in the morning's hush = When you awaken in the morning is hush

Giver ikke just mening for mig.

Could be:

When you awaken in the mornings hush

Or

When you awaken in the morning hush

Kidd skrev:When you awaken in the morning's hush = When you awaken in the morning is hush

Giver ikke just mening for mig.

Could be:

When you awaken in the mornings hush

Or

When you awaken in the morning hush

Nej. Man sætter apostrof foran genitiv, så morning's hush er korrekt.

Kidd skrev:When you awaken in the morning's hush = When you awaken in the morning is hush

Giver ikke just mening for mig.

Could be:

When you awaken in the mornings hush

Or

When you awaken in the morning hush

Det er ikke dansk men engelsk, " ' " bruges i forbindelse med ejefald, eller hvad det nu hedder.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%27

The marking of possessive case (as in the cat's whiskers).

3:55 i klippet. Der bliver digtet læst op

Hvis det er til en tattoo, så havde jeg klart valgt at få tatoveret det originale digt. Dvs. ikke ændre på noget som helst. Giver imo absolut ingen mening at gå ind og ændre på det

jeg ville også bare tage det digt der bliver linket til, på den måde undgår du grammatiske dumheder, du kan evt printe det ud og tjekke efter på sketchen, for det må sgu være ret bittert at have en tatoo med stavefejl

also,


so deep