Hej. Jeg har i skolen fået en opgave for til fredag kl 08.00. Jeg skal snakke (på engelsk) i 2 minutter, jeg bestemmer selv hvad jeg vil snakke om. Jeg valgte BB og har nu siddet i 30 minutter og skrevet et par linjer som jeg godt vil få rettet, hvis der sad nogen som var gode til engelsk.

I consider a bodybuilder as a artist, god gave him a body that he transformed into a master piece. I rather have a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa, if it had the same value. Ronnie Coleman is for me more an artist than Pablo Picasso.
People often look at a bodybuilder and thinks that its easy. How many of you can go though 30 seconds of voluntarily pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sport in the world. It demands 24 hours every day, every week. You have to eat when your stomach is full, and train no Mather how much it hurts. There is no excuse for why you shouldn’t train that day, you got to ask your self, do i want this more than the guy who is going to stand next to me?
You might all wonder why people want to do that to themselves, thats because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with your pedigree, where you come from or anything. Its a success that has all to do with your own ability to work really hard. Its a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing less.



Mange fra min klasse træner, men de har ingen forstand på det, så det behøver ikke at være fakta. Og som i kan læse, er jeg meget inspireret af MrZhasni og Kai Greene.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. Its more mental than fysical(det er mundligt, er ligeglad med hvordan jeg staver det)
Dont ever let somebody tell you, you cant do something. You got a dream, you gotta protect it. People cant do something themselves, they wanna tell you, you cant do it. you want something? go and get it, period.

Guys and girls, HELP ME!

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a master piece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa, if it had the same value???. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at a bodybuilder and thinks that its(definer hvad 'it' er) easy. How many of you can go though 30 seconds of voluntarily pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts. There is no excuse for why you shouldn’t train that day, you got to ask your self, do i want this more than the guy who is going to stand next to me? jeg forstår meningen af sætningen, men den er et stort grammatisk rod..
You might wonder why people want to do that to themselves, its because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with your pedigree, where you come from or anything. Its a success that has to do with your own ability to work really hard. Its a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.


Hvilket uddannelsesniveau er du på?

If you want success in this sport, you must have dreams and goals. Its more mental than physical.
Dont let anybody tell you, you cant do something. If you have a dream, you have to protect it.
People cant do something themselves, they wanna tell you, you cant do it. (?????)
if you want something? go and get it, period.

Maskinen skrev:I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a master piece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa, if it had the same value???. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at a bodybuilder and thinks that its(definer hvad 'it' er) easy. How many of you can go though 30 seconds of voluntarily pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts. There is no excuse for why you shouldn’t train that day, you got to ask your self, do i want this more than the guy who is going to stand next to me? jeg forstår meningen af sætningen, men den er et stort grammatisk rod..
You might wonder why people want to do that to themselves, its because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with your pedigree, where you come from or anything. Its a success that has to do with your own ability to work really hard. Its a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.


Hvilket uddannelsesniveau er du på?

Der var en del fejl
Tak for hjælpen.
Jeg går i 9 klasse.

Maskinen skrev:I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece (masterpiece i et ord). I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa, if it had the same value???. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at a bodybuilder and thinks that it's(husk ' ved sammentrækning af it+is)(definer hvad 'it' er) easy. How many of you can go though 30 seconds of voluntarily (self-inflicted er bedre) pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts. There is no excuse for why you shouldn’t train that day, you got to ask your self, do i want this more than the guy who is going to stand next to me? jeg forstår meningen af sætningen, men den er et stort grammatisk rod.. (jeg ville formulere det således: There are no excuses for not training on any particular day - you have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?)
You might wonder why people want to do that to themselves, its (nej nej nej! it+is=it's) because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with your pedigree (ordvalg!! Pedigree=stamtavle), where you come from or anything (du skriver(med et par ord imellem): it has nothing to do with anything - det er noget vrøvl). Its (it's) a success that has to do(that's based on) with your own ability to work really hard. Its (it's) a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

Jeg har rettet lidt i rettelserne - de er sgu ikke helt kosher alle sammen. Mine rettelser i parentes/med rødt.

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and thinks that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and thinks that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and thinks that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and thinks that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and thinks that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

Hvad kom du så frem til?

Ja, hvad kom du egentlig frem til?

Det står lige over TCs indlæg.

alwin skrev:I consider a bodybuilder as an artist, god gave him a body that he transforms into a masterpiece. I would rather want/have a photo of Ronnie Coleman, Kai Greene or Arnold Schwarzenegger on my wall than Mona Lisa. Ronnie Coleman is for me more of an artist than Pablo Picasso is.
People often look at bodybuilders and think that it’s easy to get big and muscular. How many of you have the dedication to go through 30 seconds of self-inflicted pain, 100 times every week for over 10 years?
Bodybuilding is one of the most demanding sports in the world. It demands 24 hours dedication every day, every week. You have to eat untill your stomach is full, and train no matter how much it hurts.
There are no excuses for not training on any particular day. You have to look yourself in the mirror and ask yourself: do I want this more than the next guy?
You might wonder why people want to do it to themselves, it’s because in bodybuilding you can feel a success that has nothing to do with anything else than you. It’s a success that's based on your own ability to work hard. It’s a result of your hard work and dedication. Nothing else.

You must have dreams and goals, if you want success in this sport. It's more mental than physical.
Don’t ever let somebody tell you, you can’t do something. You got a dream, you got to protect it. PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU, YOU’LL FAIL BECAUSE THEY CAN’T DO IT THEMSELVES. DO YOU WANT SOMETHING IN LIFE? THEN GO GET IT! PERIOD!


Det er hvad jeg kom frem til.
Thanks guys!
Og det skal lige siges at alt det med its og it's, var lidt ligegyldigt da det kun er mundligt.

Det var det eneste, jeg lige faldt over. "Think" henviser vel til det, "people" gør, hvorfor der ikke skal være 's på? "They think that bla bla bla..." - Eller er det bare mig, der har glemt al min folkeskolelærdom?

Want/have: Har ikke nogen grammatisk grund, men synes bare "have" passer bedre ind?

Jeg glemte det hele, da jeg skulle til at snakke. Men min lærer virkede tilfreds. Og igen, tak for hjælpen